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Monday, October 19, 2020

giraffe Hotel

   this is a real motel you can stay in the giraffes can visit anytime they like

I see giraffes sticking their heeds  out the window. I hear giraffes making noises.

I feel the giraffe wheat tongue. I smell the giraffes stinky poo.

I taste the giraffes food. after being with a giraffe I would feel happy because I love giraffes.

4 comments:

  1. Hey Connor i like your creativity on how you looked at the giraffe hotel maybe next time describe more

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  2. Hi Connor I am Sam. You did great on writing about about the Giraffe Motel. This reminded me of the time I fed a Giraffe with leaves on a stick and it took the whole stick. Maybe you could write what it was like to write about the Giraffe Motel. Did you like your work about the Giraffe Motel?
    From Sam.

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  3. Hey Connor. My name is Connor too! The giraffe motel must be a fun place. I have never been there how fun is it? Do you think I should go? Do they pop their head through the window when you're asleep? Did you have fun? You have done a great job I'm just increase by how you have described the draughts and what they do.
    From Connor

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  4. Hi Connor when you are sleeping it will be funny thay will eat you how are thay in the zoo thay must have a home or some wer thay must get hangre you must give them your food wen you eat your food.

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